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OC::Clary-Yivae:: [HeartMachine]© Yivae Ashnagast


Ciao :heart:
With this illustration I rapresented a part of history that I really like :heart: :woohoo:
In this pic Yivae and Clary have about 15 years and they have a small episode of love x°D!
I hope you like it :heart:
Cya ^o^


:bulletpurple:Tools:
Easy paint tool SAI
Wacom intuos3 tablet
:bulletpurple:Time:
About 8 hours
:bulletpurple:Song:
A Wonderful Guy - Tex Beneke

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

To tell you the truth, I had a really very hard time trying to figure out how to write a critique for this piece. Critiques should have a balance of both negative and positive aspects to point out, but I really can't find much negative things to say (and that's kind of rare, haha).

I love absolutely everything about this piece. From the girl's sorrowful expression, to the details of her rings and nails, the folds and drapery..everything. Even though they're subtle, the greens and reds that you used give a wonderful contrast to the sepia tones.

If I absolutely had to pick something to improve on, I'd say to maybe add more shading. I think the piece looks fine as it is, but could maybe have more depth if it had more shadow and light. They are standing next to a window after all. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" /> Also, I'm not sure why the flowers are shiney. Nothing wrong with that, just a little confusing.

I hope that you don't mind me critiquing your illustration. I think it is really something~! You have an amazing style, so I hope that you keep on making great things. Take care. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />